Darkness

3 Comments

Tags:
  • Death

    Darkness
    This pain is killing me
    felling the darkness falling over me
    you leaving me to die...
    i take my last few breathes
    my life flashes before my eyes
    all the happy and depressing times
    thoughts of you run through my head...
    clouding out other thoughts
    I weep... try get up but can't
    I see the knife you stuck in my heart
    my cold blood all around me
    I will never have the chance to tell
    you I love you
    I take my last breathe
    and then I falter.

    Poem Comments

    (3)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    mamasan commented on Darkness

    12-05-2009

    great wordery and I am not sure of the music even though I read it three times. Is it the sadness of breaking up or perhaps a new growth and need to change some things. I hear the music now and it is haunting and challenging my thoughts..........ty
    Reply to Comment

    drewking commented on Darkness

    12-28-2008

    good piece of work...
    Reply to Comment

    Terra commented on Darkness

    11-25-2008

    wow...it's been a while since I've read a poem like that one... I used to write like that too.
    Reply to Comment

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

    Unknown Source

    firefighter86’s Poems (4)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    echoes of the heart 4 11/23/2008
    My hearts desire 2 11/21/2008
    Darkness 3 11/21/2008
    Forever more 4 11/21/2008
    Top of Page