Departure

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    Departure

    Two different writings on the wall
    I thought that i was free
    I never knew at all
    the hold it had on me

    The depth of my content
    The value of his heart
    Above all the rest
    Where do we even start?

    No more does life have meaning
    Existence rolls off our backs
    The core we think we're reaching
    is slipping through the cracks

    So when you're ready to fly
    please don't go too far
    spread your wings with pride
    and you may reach the stars.

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    orsonav commented on Departure

    11-14-2008

    good flow and structure

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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