Destroyed

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  • Emotional

    Destroyed
    Like a ghost
    I walk through memories
    Of my past
    Wondering why I let you destroy my life
    Commanding me to give up
    All that I am
    All that I love
    You stripped away my self-esteem
    And left me standing before you
    Broken and used
    You made me cry
    Just to watch the tears
    Fall from my eyes
    My heart is bleeding and raw
    Afraid to trust
    I back away
    Not letting anyone in

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    wildpendigus commented on Destroyed

    05-30-2009

    I really like this poem, I truly feel it should be a song, and that she would make a fantastic songwriter from all I know about songs and songwriters, grecowong@yahoo.com
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    Blaze

    06/26/2009

    thank you very much.

    katzeyez1979 commented on Destroyed

    05-14-2009

    once again you have done it. you put an emotion into the perfect words
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    Blaze

    06/26/2009

    thank you

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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