Divine in time, The Beauty in me to thee

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This is the 2nd poem, which turns out to be a 3 piece poem.
Kim

Divine in time, The Beauty in me to thee

I can see the wind swaying through the trees. It is so calming to me, the Beauty of Mother Earth and of you and me. I fully absorb this Beauty into the windows of my Soul, they are my eyes. My Heart knows my Spirit they open so very wide, my very Essence is Divine. Through Thee, I am so Pleased. Thank God the Beauty is in me and every living thing. I will always feel Healing Love through the Mother Earth and Thee, Divinity is Love Eternally.

Kimberly Ann Stefanac

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spbsdude commented on Divine in time, The Beauty in me to thee

01-26-2011

A nice message, but more can be said about this subject of God and nature. We have mother nature or the Gaia principle, the living earth. And we have God the Father of our spirits. How do they mesh and interact? Still, nice job.

rossmangeles commented on Divine in time, The Beauty in me to thee

06-29-2009

I love the message. I like the choice of words. I am pleased with your appreciation to our mother earth and the Divinity of Thee. If you will re-arrange this poem to make separate stanza, it will help your reader to chew the message easily and will be more pleasing to the eyes. Indeed, this is a very wonderful poem.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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