Down

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    My words feel like stones

    I just keep choking down

    My thoughts feel like bones

    Crumbling under the pressure

    I try to speak, all that comes are groans

    I fall down, deep down

    Into a sweet, nothingness drone

    Into a great leisure

    In the background sweet, sweet tones

    As I fall down, down, down…….

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    am2anangel commented on Down

    01-07-2012

    great descriptive write full of passionate loss. well done. -Tonya
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    windsongs commented on Down

    01-07-2012

    Proverbs 24:14 Know that wisdom is such to your soul; if you find it, there will be a future, and your hope will not be cut off. A friend told me this in another way! Theres hope for today!
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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