Drunk Love

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    Poem Commentary

    Again wrote in Ak for a girl not a guy 

    Drunk Love

     Me, we, us

    The fantasy of depth

    Opened to her as she saw his…

    ENORMOUS

    Magnificent BIG

    Head, filled

    Of deliciously  repulsive

    LOUD 

    Dumb, mean, smooth

    Hard bodied boys

    Gently her

    Convicted companion

    Whispered

    BREATHE

    Wee little one

    Man hating cock lover

    Lets go take shot and make WILD

    Drunk torrent love 


    ~Kaylyn (c) 1999

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    paulwallhtown commented on Drunk Love

    10-08-2009

    This is a very nice poem. Good job. .

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    Kaylyn’s Poems (10)

    Title Comments
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    Me 0
    You and I 0
    Drunk Love 1
    Forever and Always 0
    Love is blind 0
    I must 0
    Drunken pleasures 0
    Beautiful 0
    Say your heart 1
    Cold love 2