Dusk

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Dusk

Blue hued purple melded clouds outlined in golden orange sun glow meander at a leisurely pace across a light cyan sky. Like some unworldly silent beasts the clouds move as if grazing on the day's last sunshine. The sun sinks lower; the cyan plain across which the cloud herd migrates gradually gives way to a less illuminated version of it self. I sit calmly, resting. A long days work done. Upon my front porch a sturdy wooden bench holds my tired body. The air is crisp and cool as are my sips of beer. There is something very satisfying in the enjoyment of a sunset and cold brew. Refreshing is the breeze. Delightful are the sights and sounds in this brief hour of dusk; this rare glimpse of every day magic in which day and night waltz. My favorite time of day.

            Contently, I listen to the subtle symphony ensemble of sounds that can only be herd together during this phantasmal span. Crickets chirp their soft melody. A distant traffic roar of those journeying home to their loved ones seems a waterfall's babble. Children's laughter ripples from down the street. Some neighbor's TV plays a happy commercial jingle. Lone far-off barks of a dog echo out.

            Gazing around, a smile creeps across my face. No bigger than my pinky, a fluttering butterfly navigates through and over the blades of grass that is my lawn. On the adjacent road a woman pulls into her driveway and opens the car's backdoor letting out a golden retriever before they both disappear into their abode. Trees near one another rustle leaves and their branches sway against each others, like old colleagues shaking hands. Just a couple of houses down I spot an outside light come to life. I ponder the occupant's anticipation of someone yet to come home.

            With quiet fanfare the life giving light has lost it-self far below the tree line. The cloud heard has shed their golden outlines and deep blue soaks through the atmosphere. Mosquitos congregate for a nightly convention. Out the corner of my eye zips the silhouette of bat. Sweet drink of mine you are no more.

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ansari commented on Dusk

06-14-2010

A wonderful commentary of nature. Yes if we think and feel it theres so much to enjoy in the sights and sounds of nature which we take for granted of course. Your poetry is absolutely marvellous, its like a slide show, and so easy to visualize. I am also a lover of nature. Thank you for the read. I have added a new poem ' Nancy or Sarah ....hope to get your comments.

SuSpence commented on Dusk

06-07-2010

Haha I totally agree with words, I loved this one too. Maybe my favourite write of the 3 you have posted thus far. The dreamy poetic tone to this was awesome. You had me pulled in from the first line, 'Blue hued purple melded clouds outlined in golden orange sun glow meander at a leisurely pace across a light cyan sky'. Brilliant. ~Spence

WordSlinger commented on Dusk

06-03-2010

lol, you have no idea, how much I like this, welcome to OP, ty WS

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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