Emerald Fields

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    Writing is Art! In this poem, I personally claim it as my personal favorite. Not only is it a poem that makes much sense, but it contrasts itself into the realm of art by painting a picture for the reader and spiritually in the sense of creation.

    Emerald Fields


    I stare at an empty canvas in front of me..

    Imagining the greenest of fields
    reaching way up high
    gracefully fondling, caressing,
    teasing a velveteen sky.


    I take hold of the brush calling my name..

    I begin by painting a sun
    to illuminate the lands.
    Highlights to portray vitality
    smoldering in my hands.


    I clean the brush while pondering colors..

    I cast upon the canvas
    birds sailing abroad,
    soaring, flying high. Free!
    Then, a treeline unflawed.


    In time, this masterpiece will need a frame..

    But first, I must paint a
    woman, salvation yields,
    groveling the mercy of Heaven.
    Then, I shall call it, "Emerald Fields!"

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    GentleT commented on Emerald Fields

    07-24-2010

    When we look at the magnificent beauty of creation one should believe in a creator. May you find your green fields.
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    Qualin commented on Emerald Fields

    07-19-2010

    yea what you said...I couldn't have said it better...but I'll try you are going to be a favorite your style is very different and very unique...a 10 for me...Qualin
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    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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