Eternity

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    Eternity
    He came into my heart and invaded my thoughts.i wondered if he ever left could i breathe without him,its to much stress so i just push the thought out of my troubled mind.Why"because his eyes tell me that he love me for who i am and not who im going to be one day.Our hearts got this connection that sends electric currents throughout my body,mind,and soul.Love like this got to be for real and not just for a day or two but eternity.

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    toxicindiangirl commented on Eternity

    02-03-2009

    i really like it, i dont usually like this kind of poems; i write darker poems. But its really good for what it is.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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