Even If Mirrors

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  • Sadness

    Even If Mirrors
    Smile for me
    Even if it's fake
    Dance for me
    Even if it hurts
    Sing for me
    Even if your voice breaks
    As I look into the mirror
    I see that I am gone
    No one here can save me
    And I am not allowed to ask

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    hdmac commented on Even If Mirrors

    07-11-2009

    Dark poem. I like the images that you use. You must be a 'mangal' fan. Keep your poems short and to the point.
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    Metaldoll commented on Even If Mirrors

    03-22-2009

    Very straight-forward in your approach. this poem actually reminded me of a part of a song from Slipknot (dont know if u like that music or not, anyway). It says: "The whole world is my enemy, and I am a walking target. Two times the devil with all the significance." I really like this poem. Nice job
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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