Face of Fallacy

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  • Emotional

    Face of Fallacy
    Crippled of ripe words,
    We stand stiffly among this 
    Unwelcome air.

    Beathe.

    Transpired tension is pinched,
    Pulled of tendancies,
    Plucked by selfish fingers.

    Unexpected apathy grips me,
    My sanity...

    Breathe.
    Breathe.

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    DeepEclipse commented on Face of Fallacy

    07-12-2010

    Hell yeah like silent subliminal suffocation. -Unexpected apathy- like it just creeps up on ya. Takes over what you thougth you had controlled. Good read.
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    kpeery09 commented on Face of Fallacy

    02-26-2010

    Very Nice, I like this one as well, keep up the good work you are truly great.
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    derfiniw23 commented on Face of Fallacy

    12-05-2009

    My this is definitely written by a poet. AWESOME ............
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    dezzyg123

    12/07/2009

    Thank you so much! (:

    HarverTomsson commented on Face of Fallacy

    12-04-2009

    How descriptive of the chilling effect of selfishness. It stifles all overtures of society past even formal discourse. Like a canary in a coal mine, the poet feels it first, and sings a warning to all who would listen.
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    redbloodink commented on Face of Fallacy

    12-04-2009

    awsome ...... Just so powerful....... Great work. red
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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