Fall back

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    Fall back

    Wrapped up in your essence, surrounded myself with hopeful thoughts. Entangled in your words, concluding your the gift in which my angel brought.Admiring your every gesture, as I watched your lashes bat so peacefully. Engulfed myself in your aroma, wondering how I could indulge in your thoughts so plentifully. Basking in your radiance, as your smile brightened my life. You fulfilled a desire that was unknown to me, until I spoke with you that night! I was so unaware of these feelings I felt and the common goals that's we shared. Not until that moment, did I know you existed. But at that moment is when I began to care.I needed to know your name and what hood you grew up in. How you came to be this exceptional person, and some how avoiding the common trend. What was it that made you think so deeply about the misunderstood and misapplied occurrences in life? How did you cut through the drama, press fast forward and be this rare individual in my sights. But I didn't ask......I just watched you from a distance, cause when I saw the band on your hand i knew I would end up your mistress.

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    lonewolf commented on Fall back

    02-18-2009

    good write. hope to read more

    SILKYTWEED commented on Fall back

    02-10-2009

    That's hot!!!

    stormimartin commented on Fall back

    02-04-2009

    wow, very nice... good writing!

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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