Fallen Angels

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Fallen Angels


That day…was rather breezy
Swirled in the midst of autumn chill
Fallen leaves blown to their fate
Freely down on my feet in crisp state

A glimpse at a conspicuous soul
Sat lax on a green, coarsened bench
A steaming flask in his hand
His vision fixed…plethora at hand

A glow…painted on his weary face
His serene smile in wretched phase
A warm feeling it brought forth
At that moment… my energy restored

His smile…an ardent blazon
To a hastened but pliant evolution
His restive, mystified demeanor
Enamored…his dignified manor

The wind in its might then
The lost soul found its path to mine
Swiftly…he walked on
Against the wind’s grasp to oblivion

His aura slowly dawned on me
An armed tune in his gentle voice
Rouse emotions…cloaked intentions freed
A subtle daunt…admonished poise


x gs x

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gogant commented on Fallen Angels

11-25-2009

Amazing...simply amazing...simply beautiful. You are one in a million, Athena. Again, this kind of poetry takes my breath away.......................................................................gogant

Athena

12/28/2009

thank you

JadedJezzabel commented on Fallen Angels

06-15-2009

i really like the discriptive value of your choice of words......in form and impact this poem is very powerful and visually stimulating.

Athena

06/21/2009

u have an eye for poetry, thanks =)

shadowcatcher commented on Fallen Angels

03-12-2009

Your descriptive wording puts me right there. You are very talented. I hope to read more of your work.

Athena

05/31/2009

thank you =)

Robb08 commented on Fallen Angels

02-14-2009

very talented.

Athena

05/31/2009

thank you =)

Phoenix9 commented on Fallen Angels

12-28-2008

very well written, very enjoyable read!

Athena

05/31/2009

thank you =)

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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