Feel

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  • Sadness

    Feel
    I am not a wall
    I have feelings
    I am like a flower
    I have to grow
    I had been hungry
    Hungry for what?
    Love I guess
    Hungery for something
    More
    Hungry for appreciation
    I have dined with the
    Showdow of love,
    I've been incarcerated
    In a mind of hate
    Where there was no sign
    Of life
    I've been incarcerated
    In the mind of a child,
    Where I had no
    Responsibility
    I can't love
    I have sheltered hate
    So long,
    So there I spent my lonely life
    In hatred

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    vincenzo commented on Feel

    06-28-2009

    baby girl... how on earth can you allow life to be so unfair to you? (just kidding.) very good thematic content. you succeeded in pouring your mind through your lines. good work girl. i think you may wish to read my "Saints"
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