felt like writing

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    felt like writing

    i said that i felt like writing you a poem
    but it dont feel right with so much goin on
    and i keep goin on about what be goin on
    not even thinkin how you got your own shyt goin wrong
    and everything goin wrong and we cant move on
    and damn i hate to cry but i cant stay strong
    you always break me down, i aint cried in so long
    and everytime i cry it goes on for so long
    that i just wana tell you goodbye and so long
    but i cant cuz we been in this thing for so long
    so i try to suck it up and we both just hold on
    holdin on by a thread but thread aint that strong
    so you hold onto me and i’ll hold onto you
    and just hope and pray that we'll both make it through
    and if you cant get to me then im comin to you
    and i hope your mom aint shook about me tryna come through
    but God knows it's been too long since i last saw you
    and it wasnt for too long when i last saw you
    did i stare for too long when i first saw you
    it was like the first time that i first saw you
    and when i saw you i couldnt believe that i was seeing you
    and it wasnt too long after that, that you was leaving, you
    your leaving made see how much i do be needing you
    when you hurt i hurt, i mean im even bleeding you
    im made of you, when i sweat its my pores you're seeping through
    to the outside of me, when they look at me they see you
    when they listen to me do they hear you too
    when you listen to me do i really get through
    when you think i dont listen jus know i really do
    i really do love you the way i say i do
    im not fabricating lies just for something to do
    i've contemplated and debated whether im really meant for you
    and in the end i cant find not one reason why we shouldnt be two
    two as one in the end on the day we say i do

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    Bwyn commented on felt like writing

    01-26-2009

    I can feel the loneliness you have expressed in this piece :(

    Phoenix9 commented on felt like writing

    01-20-2009

    good, but too many ands

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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