Finding Forever 12/31/2008

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Finding Forever 12/31/2008

U can find inspiration in anything
If only you believe
The tough times can deceive and defeat u
But if you stay proud
Full of humility and drive
Threes nothing that can stop u
But your insecurities inside
It’s always so easy to call causes lost
It may be harder but what’s the true cost?
Instead invest the effort
And join the fight
For the right
Of life!
Humanity and the wild
Weathers extreme and mild
It all complied
Together on this one earth
A place that is of all of our births
Too often it’s the inner hurts
That makes us desert
Retreat inside in premature resignation
When we should be appreciating each moment
In anticipation of revelation

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edemus commented on Finding Forever 12/31/2008

05-22-2009

this is a very heart warming poem, it is of a very good quality, words carefully selected by the writer and it is also very purposeful. indeed it is a well organized poem and the writer must be commended

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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