First Love

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  • Confusion
    • Cakeboy9
    • "Fear Less, hope more; eat less chew more; whine less, breathe more; talk less, say more; hate less, love more; and all good things are yours."

    First Love

     THE DAYS WERE BAD
    THE GOING WAS TOUGH
        NO LOVE IN MY LIFE
        NO ONE I COULD TRUST
    NO FRIEND TO HEAR MY SORROWS
    NO ONE COULD GIVE ME THAT TOUCH
        THEN YOU ENTERED MY LIFE
        & I COULD SEE YOU IN MY EYES
    ALL THIS HAPPENED WAS MY LUCK
    OR I WUD HAVE BEEN OUT FOR A DUCK
        YOU WERE SOO COOL
        AND WE TOOK OUR TIME
    THE NIGHT HAD GONE
    AND THE DAY HAD COME
            I HAD A FRIEND THAT WAS ALL IN ONE.

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    Karma885 commented on First Love

    10-01-2009

    AWWWW SO CUTE... I LOVED THIS POEM AWWW. SOO GETS A 10
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    chucky1982 commented on First Love

    10-01-2009

    wow cake this is great a good read. im glad u came to this site we always love good poetry. bravo
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    Cakeboy9

    10/02/2009

    Thank u dear!

    chubbc commented on First Love

    10-01-2009

    good poem but if i might add you might want to put more emotion into a poem of this nature let it come from the heart just a thought but i liked it
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    poetsara113 commented on First Love

    10-01-2009

    very nice i liked it alot so nice when you have a true friend
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    Cakeboy9

    10/01/2009

    Thank u Dear.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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