For we are the world

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For we are the world

We are the world,and only we can change it.
The white,the black
The strong,the weak.
The powerful,the powerless.
The good, the bad.
The earthbound ones,the ones with their heads in the clouds.
These are what defines us,what makes us who we are.
These are that makes the world.
For we are the world.

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kpeery09 commented on For we are the world

01-25-2010

Very Nice, it truly is something to hold on to, if you always believe in this then you know you can make a difference in the world. I give you 10 for rate

SuperChick76 commented on For we are the world

11-13-2009

So true. I mean, you're absolutely right! We ARE the world and ONLY we can change it! Brilliant. It was short, sweet and to the point. A cute poem. Very nicely put together. Good job. I think it could be filled out a little more though, but I'm not really sure how, so... Ponder on that. But, as I said above, it is nice just the way it is. Beautifully written. Good job. =D

Lolee commented on For we are the world

08-05-2009

Good poem. I wish there was just a little bit more to it, but what you have is great! Thanks for sharing! Come read a few of mine. Keep writing...okay?

sammia commented on For we are the world

08-05-2009

cool i like this its short yet stright to the point keep writing

HopeOhlarik commented on For we are the world

07-31-2009

very well written point recieved well. good job lil one!

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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