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Carbon Copy of Perfection

08-24-2009 at 02:02:08 PM

Carbon Copy of Perfection

The carbon copy of perfection
is a none existent fabrication
that lends a hand to imagination
and develops contemplation

Life’s rumination
absolute deliberation
brings reality’s true vision
and shares a voice of reason

A meal of satisfaction
mends the soul’s starvation
and gives immense substance
to the mind’s authentic essence

A snapshot in realization
can heal an entire nation
or at least a contribution
a path to reconciliation

So live life in contentment
and give in to gratification
as you face days of misfortune
just exhale and embrace God’s solution




08-26-2009 at 10:25:02 PM

Re: Carbon Copy of Perfection

wow I absolutely love this!

09-02-2009 at 08:35:47 AM

Re: Carbon Copy of Perfection

I love that, Peat!

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.