Secretdreams

I am new in the site. How can I get my poems rate? Please help

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Originally Posted by Secretdreams

I am new in the site. How can I get my poems rate? Please help

I'LL BE THERE

… I’ll be there, where I lived …

…where I played… where I laughed and cried

Where my body grew and my spirit shined…

Where my seeds were planted

…Soon… I’ll be there



Soon… I’ll be there, in the sunny forests…

…In the deepest oceans, … in the light blue skies

No regrets, nor sorrows

Only peaceful thoughts, unreserved love

To embrace my fate

…Soon… I’ll be there



Soon… I’ll be there, and be at this juncture

…in the land who adopted me, with the guy who loves me

Where I found tranquility, care for, and contentment

…during the distressing lessons of life’s events

…Soon… I’ll be there



Soon.. I’ll be there, where I lived…

…where I played… where I laughed and cried

Where my body grew and my spirit shined..

Where my seeds were planted

Soon…I’ll be there…Soon [/i]

Last edited by Secretdreams 09-28-2009 at 08:39:10 PM

Re: Secretdreams

IT SOUNDS GOOD, GIVES ME HOPE. KEEP IT COMING.