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Fallen Idol

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09-28-2009 at 12:30:35 PM
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Fallen Idol

The Idol on high
doesn't want it
fans want more
the Idol doesn't need it
fans crave it
Risen !
To the top
fans gather behind the Idol
Push !
The Idol falls
fans applaud
the Idol expires
fans worship
sick and twisted reality
the Idol attains Immortality !

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09-29-2009 at 11:32:06 PM
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Re: Fallen Idol

It would be nice to get some feedback... smirk

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09-30-2009 at 05:32:25 AM

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Is this Jj? This poem reminds me of the story of Jimi Hendrix, actually. I had to do research on his life for an essay I was writing. How do you like this new site? I recognized your name, I think...excellent write, as always

Love,

jenimoon (luna) *smile*

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