Love for you
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Love for you
I just stood there frustarted
drained and helpless
Life wouldn't allow
for me to come to you
and i was forced to watch
through this plexiglass wall.
How you hurt and cried
and all i could do
was stand and watch you fall
with me splayed against this
damn wall!
I knew for certain on that day
This was love I felt!
But I must accept and deal with
what life has dealt
My heart hurt so bad for you
I only hoped you knew
I was here and
how much I loved and cared too! Average user rating
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LindasLife
1 day 5 hr 33 min ago
Beautiful,you will go far.Feelings in words are great stories of ones life.God bless.
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reply from oreo5560
1 day 1 hr 29 min ago
I agree..thank you for your compliment!
niteman
3 days 0 hr 18 min ago
Very nice poem the words you have written touched me, i think someone that writes as good as you has a careing soul,,,i love the way you write keep up the great work,,,Thanks.
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reply from oreo5560
1 day 1 hr 30 min ago
thank you for your encouragement and kind words!
PoeticVisionary
on 09-25-2009
Very nicely said...you can almost feel the empathy coming off this poem..
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reply from oreo5560
on 09-25-2009
Thank you so much-it really was written in a moment that i so needed to go and be and help someone -but just couldnt because of circumstances and It was one of the hardest things i ever experienced..Thank you for your feedback and comments-it really is appreciated -thank u!..Debbie
Blueroad
on 09-25-2009
It's a good poem. I liked reading it. I think, poetry is something like recording the moments. And, you've done well in this regard.
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on 09-25-2009
Thank you for your thoughts and i think you are right about poetry-it is like recording the moments in life..again thank you ..debbie
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Re: Love for you
I think you are on your way to becomeing a very great poet,,,,
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Re: Love for you
I think this shows lots of pain and the hurt of needing to be with someone that really need you,,,great poem,,,thank you ,,you'll go far,,, 
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Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.
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