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Please review.. New version of Waiting in the Rain

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10-06-2009 at 11:41:27 PM

Please review.. New version of Waiting in the Rain

http://www.originalpoetry.com/i-waited-for-him-in-the-rain

Thank you for an honest opinion on this sad poem..

Appreciative,
CatsMeow

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A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.
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