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Please review.. New version of Waiting in the Rain

10-06-2009 at 11:41:27 PM

Please review.. New version of Waiting in the Rain

http://www.originalpoetry.com/i-waited-for-him-in-the-rain

Thank you for an honest opinion on this sad poem..

Appreciative,
CatsMeow

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Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.