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... Our day by day

10-11-2009 at 07:45:02 AM

... Our day by day

Still dark … the beginning of the daylight hours
The aroma of coffee surrounding our nice place…
There are no children… just you and I together
…sharing our goals for the opening day

Still dark… and we stir the pleasures
Of what is offered in the calendar day…
Life is easier when removing its pressure
Bringing down walls … keeping despair away

Later on… the sun lands with pleasant colors
And we head off to the new world of these days
At a distance we squeeze the unsullied moments
Knowing that more are coming our way

…Then, the night rises with its secrecy silence
A perceive sound of melodies turn up
A glass of wine… a toast … our bare bodies
The Dance of Love in the darling night

Darling nights…sweet inspiration for lovers
Wild and peaceful …with supreme outcome
You and I integrated as one body…
…sensations touching our souls as one

…Still dark…at the beginning of the daylight hours
The aroma of coffee surrounding our nice place
Waking up with a smile you and I together
Beautiful day, forever… our day by day

10/10/09
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10-11-2009 at 10:36:30 AM

Re: ... Our day by day

what beautiful words
noreen

10-11-2009 at 11:03:55 AM

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Thank you! grin

10-12-2009 at 07:41:15 PM
  • niteman
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Re: ... Our day by day

Quote:
Originally Posted by Secretdreams

Still dark … the beginning of the daylight hours
The aroma of coffee surrounding our nice place…
There are no children… just you and I together
…sharing our goals for the opening day

Still dark… and we stir the pleasures
Of what is offered in the calendar day…
Life is easier when removing its pressure
Bringing down walls … keeping despair away

Later on… the sun lands with pleasant colors
And we head off to the new world of these days
At a distance we squeeze the unsullied moments
Knowing that more are coming our way

…Then, the night rises with its secrecy silence
A perceive sound of melodies turn up
A glass of wine… a toast … our bare bodies
The Dance of Love in the darling night

Darling nights…sweet inspiration for lovers
Wild and peaceful …with supreme outcome
You and I integrated as one body…
…sensations touching our souls as one

…Still dark…at the beginning of the daylight hours
The aroma of coffee surrounding our nice place
Waking up with a smile you and I together
Beautiful day, forever… our day by day

10/10/09
May I receive comments? rolleyes

10-12-2009 at 07:46:11 PM
  • niteman
  • niteman
  • Posts: 33

Re: ... Our day by day

Secretdreams,,,I love this poem,,,you are very good at your writing and this poem is one that touches my heart,,the more i read this one the more i want to read more,,,thank you Niteman..

10-12-2009 at 08:34:28 PM

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Thank you! you are so sweet. Is very pleasant to read comments like yours. I also like your style and I promise I am going to make the time to read all your poems and make my comments.

10-12-2009 at 08:47:38 PM
  • niteman
  • niteman
  • Posts: 33

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Thank you so very much,,,you are so kind,,,and i truely love your poems,,,,Niteman.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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