I Didn’t
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I Didn’t
I Didn’t
I didn't want to be one of those girls who tripped just because you wouldn't come to bed!
I was able to give you your space
I didn't want to be one of those girls who tripped if you went out some nites
I was down wit dat!! Cause most dudes can't get that
A true Chicka down ass bitch to take care of your every need
But after 10 years I wasn't enough wasn't satisfying or being sensitive like she was
It was just conversation that's what you said
But look how things ended up
Really F'd up
Every time I think about u talking to her giving her your time on my dime
Oh hell naw that aint cool!!!
I know we've traveled down a dark road or 2 and bounced back stronger than ever.
Never had no major thing to serious to come between us and the one thing
I knew for sure unfaithfulness would never become a factor
How wrong I was
So excuse me if I'm not giving U what your accustomed 2
But I gotta build back up what U tore down just for a little conversation
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Re: I Didn’t
I think this reads too much like a letter. Maybe you should try to break it up a bit. Example, something like:
I didn't want to be
one of those girls
who tripped
just because
you wouldn't come to bed..
Just an opinion...
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