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A Crowded Place - some comments on the form of this poem!http://www.originalpoetry.com/a-crowded-place |
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Re: A Crowded Place - some comments on the form of this poem!It's casually metered using choice phrases that depict loss (or lack) of love. In forthright terms |
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Re: A Crowded Place - some comments on the form of this poem!
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Re: A Crowded Place - some comments on the form of this poem!You are most welcome, my new friend. And hopefully, you won't see too many errors in my posted work. (though, the longer I look, more seem to appear) I also posted something for critique, but not poetry. thanks for taking the advice with a grain of salt |
Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.
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