dance of the snowflakes
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dance of the snowflakesplease let me know if this is good enough for contest |
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Re: dance of the snowflakesI think you have a neat style of writing. You can take a simple action [watching snow flakes fall] and describe it simply yet at the same time allow others to see the simple beauty you see in it...you use common relatable themes to portray your feelings and ideas. Keep developing your style, and try to encourage these elements to grow and improve! =] |
Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.
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