Tecnology Overload - too much to do everyday

Hey, poets,
I need to let them give someone else thier fire! I am not doing it anymore..LOL Please review and comment on this poem. thanks, expressing me Stress, Angst, Feelings, About The World's overload of Technology.

http://www.originalpoetry.com/walls-closing-in-heaps-of-debris-fall-do

Sample of this poem:

"So stop it, don’t call on me.
I can’t take it, I’ve shut the shutters.
Unplugged that phone, I laid on the floor.
Go go go away I can’t answer the door."

CatsMeow