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Tribute to the loss of my father

11-17-2009 at 12:47:59 AM

Tribute to the loss of my father

I am new to this site and haven't met too many poets yet. The ones I have met are great and I love this site. I would love feed back on my poems. I want to learn and would love to be critiqued. I am open and willing to learn.

Would you please read the poem I wrote on the anniversary of my fathers Death?

http://www.originalpoetry.com/daddy-itacircs-been-18-years

I also wrote a poem about owls

http://www.originalpoetry.com/the-owls-i-hear-at-the-edge-of-the-woods

And one about Motherhood

http://www.originalpoetry.com/when-does-motherhood-begin

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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