Please critique my style
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Please critique my styleI've posted two of my poems on this site....but no one has commented yet =[. Could anybody read them and critique me and my style? I want to improve my writing...you guys got any suggestions? =x |
In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.
Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.