Working toward the sonnet/starting as the novice poet
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RE: Working beyond the sonnet/ The Pindaric Triad/ a poem in 3 parts - |
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RE: Working toward the sonnet/starting as the novice poetRon |
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RE: Working toward the sonnet/starting as the novice poetRon, thank you for the honor!! |
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RE: Working toward the sonnet/starting as the novice poetKah, |
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RE: Working toward the sonnet/starting as the novice poetThank you, WS! I can't tell you how wonderful I feel about this - how honored and proud |
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RE: Working toward the sonnet/starting as the novice poetCongratulations to kah on this great honor! Wow! Just think, future generations in poetry may speak of a Hilliard as we speak now of a Hollander. WS is right, history is being made here. Thanks as always, RHPeat, for sharing your incredible gifts with us. The Pindaric Triad (and for me next, the Koan) seem fairly simple compared to the Hilliard, though! |
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RE: Working toward the sonnet/starting as the novice poetWouldn't you agree that in order to see someone else do a Hillard, that the weight of their concluding line would have to be the "message" of the poem? |
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RE: Working toward the sonnet/starting as the novice poetRon said "I'm not so sure that the message is held in the last line of either of our poems, Kimberly's or mine. There is a jumping off place for a deeper understanding about other things within the poem as closure on the poem in the last line, but I'm not so sure that is the message of either poem. As I see it: I'm not so sure the last line is a message that holds the whole poem as a meaningful event. " |
Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.
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