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Lets do a new updated for the year 2010 twas the night before christmas

11-25-2010 at 12:20:56 PM

Lets do a new updated for the year 2010 twas the night before christmas

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Twas the night before Christmas and all through the city
The streets were all empty and a little bit gritty

11-25-2010 at 12:55:30 PM

RE: Lets do a new updated for the year 2010 twas the night before christmas


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Twas the night before Christmas and all through the city
The streets were all empty and a little bit gritty
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Something falls into line

From such blessings Devine

And I note I’m ignoring what’s pretty!


rolleyesrolleyesrolleyesrolleyesrolleyesrolleyes

11-25-2010 at 02:13:12 PM

RE: RE: Lets do a new updated for the year 2010 twas the night before christmas

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Originally Posted by devaamido


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Twas the night before Christmas and all through the city
The streets were all empty and a little bit gritty
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Something falls into line

From such blessings Devine

And I note I’m ignoring what’s pretty!


rolleyesrolleyesrolleyesrolleyesrolleyesrolleyes


Foil paper of gold with bows so itty bitty
Ribbons and tinsel glisten and glitter
Sugar cookies and tarts without any bitters
Smiles all around as the Christmas tree flickers
cheesecheesered facered face

11-25-2010 at 05:50:08 PM

RE: RE: RE: Lets do a new updated for the year 2010 twas the night before christmas

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Originally Posted by ApaqRasgirl

Originally Posted by devaamido


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Twas the night before Christmas and all through the city
The streets were all empty and a little bit gritty
Quote


Something falls into line

From such blessings Devine

And I note I’m ignoring what’s pretty!


rolleyesrolleyesrolleyesrolleyesrolleyesrolleyes


Foil paper of gold with bows so itty bitty
Ribbons and tinsel glisten and glitter
Sugar cookies and tarts without any bitters
Smiles all around as the Christmas tree flickers
cheesecheesered facered face


The lights sure did shimmer
But then they went much dimmer
As my hair stood up on my neck
When from out on the deck
I heard something snicker
I

11-25-2010 at 07:04:06 PM
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RE: RE: RE: RE: Lets do a new updated for the year 2010 twas the night before christmas

Quote:
Originally Posted by JadedJezzabel

Originally Posted by ApaqRasgirl

Originally Posted by devaamido


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Twas the night before Christmas and all through the city
The streets were all empty and a little bit gritty
Quote


Something falls into line

From such blessings Devine

And I note I’m ignoring what’s pretty!


rolleyesrolleyesrolleyesrolleyesrolleyesrolleyes


Foil paper of gold with bows so itty bitty
Ribbons and tinsel glisten and glitter
Sugar cookies and tarts without any bitters
Smiles all around as the Christmas tree flickers
cheesecheesered facered face


The lights sure did shimmer
But then they went much dimmer
As my hair stood up on my neck
When from out on the deck
I heard something snicker
I

I went to the deck slider
Threw it open much wider
Than ever I had before
In the snow I saw tracks
From some critters with racks
Just outside of the door

11-25-2010 at 08:08:09 PM

RE: RE: RE: RE: RE: Lets do a new updated for the year 2010 twas the night before christmas

Quote:
Originally Posted by Londo

Originally Posted by JadedJezzabel

Originally Posted by ApaqRasgirl

Originally Posted by devaamido


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Twas the night before Christmas and all through the city
The streets were all empty and a little bit gritty
Quote


Something falls into line

From such blessings Devine

And I note I’m ignoring what’s pretty!


rolleyesrolleyesrolleyesrolleyesrolleyesrolleyes


Foil paper of gold with bows so itty bitty
Ribbons and tinsel glisten and glitter
Sugar cookies and tarts without any bitters
Smiles all around as the Christmas tree flickers
cheesecheesered facered face


The lights sure did shimmer
But then they went much dimmer
As my hair stood up on my neck
When from out on the deck
I heard something snicker
I

I went to the deck slider
Threw it open much wider
Than ever I had before
In the snow I saw tracks
From some critters with racks
Just outside of the door


Than all of a sudden I heard something jingling
Such magic filled my eyes as I heard a voice calling
On Dasher on Dancer on Prancer and Vixen
On Comet on Cupid on Donner and Blitzen
Up and away sailed Santa's sleigh
A trail of gold stardust behind it did lay
As Santa and his reindeer hastened away
tongue laughtongue laughtongue winktongue winkrolleyesrolleyesred facered face

Last edited by ApaqRasgirl 11-25-2010 at 08:11:20 PM

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