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ZEN STICK

12-03-2010 at 07:17:43 PM

ZEN STICK

A previous version of “Zen Stick” received a lot (now incorporated) feedback. I’d appreciate your opinion now, if you have time.

I've revised & am I've now reposting the poem. It may be viewed as a group project (more or less)

Thanks!...........................................d

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.