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12-04-2010 at 10:43:34 AM

criticism needed

hello frends...
i am hungry of some honest constructive criticism. I didnt actually visited this site for many days. And i wrote a very little poetry here. I thought this site is like every other site.The more i explored things here, the more serious i became about the site. so guys please help me with some criticism.

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Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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