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    freestyle not title yet

    i wanna shake and convulse at the sight of you
    blow kissing in the night at you
    loose my breath at a glance of you
    stare in complete silence when remembering you
    everything about you leaves me breathless
    me without you only leaves me reckless
    i second guess this,life i live without you is hurting me
    i wanna be hurt by you,my sad existence lies in unfamiliarity
    a clarity that binds us together,just sit there and listen
    because you owe me that much.

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    redbloodink commented on freestyle not title yet

    12-28-2009

    Powerful...... love can hurt sometimes .... but when there is only but pain and hurt.... that might not be real love..... Jesus hurt for all of us but He also saved us by His blood..... red

    sammia commented on freestyle not title yet

    08-03-2009

    very well written and very deep to good write i like it

    NayInLove commented on freestyle not title yet

    04-25-2009

    hottt as usual :)

    MizBlaze commented on freestyle not title yet

    04-25-2009

    I enjoyed that one....tight work....

    kareemrocks3 commented on freestyle not title yet

    04-25-2009

    very well written

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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