Freeze Frame....

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Freeze Frame....

She sits in her domain,
Mind whirling with lucid thoughts,
Trying to define the pain,
No composure left to regain.
Pushing through the darkness,
As deep as she can go,
Accepting the pain,
As it refuses to let go.
Taking the blame,
Wondering why she came,
Turning her back on everything that still remains,
Destroying what kept her sane.
No longer trying to rectify,
No longer trying to deny,
No tears left to cry,
Just wanting to curl up and die.
Wanting so much,
Yet giving so little,
Running away from it all,
Wanting her world to stand still.
Freeze frame a moment in time,
When the eyes would shine,
The heart was mine,
And nothing about a child's love could define.

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wildpendigus commented on Freeze Frame....

07-09-2009

I like this poem it's very good. I like the content also the title, this would be a good POP Song eventhough it is a good poem, from my years in music we normally let the title dictate the meaning of the song, but it's good grecowong@yahoo.com

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

Gingereyes’s Poems (35)

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Deep Inside 0
Inner Disease 1
Only You 0
Blind Eyes 0
Lie To Me 0
Desire 0
Beating Hearts 0
Subject To Rule 0
Time 0
Uncertainty 0
Growing Desire 0
Your Turn 0
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Addicted.... 1
Till The End Of Time.... 0
Set My Heart Free.... 0
When You.... 0
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Once So Sweet.... 0
Can't You See.... 0
My Only Need.... 0
I Want It All.... 0
Silently Begging... 0
Ultimate Domination... 0
In Too Deep... 1
Set My Heart Free... 0
sorry For The Way I Am... 2
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Subdued.... 0
Catch Me.... 0
Eyes Not Blind.... 0
Will You.... 0
Something To Find.... 1
Story Untold.... 0
Freeze Frame.... 1