Ghost

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Ghost

Maybe in a previous, I was mischievous, and real devious, seems they don't believe in us.
Dead man walking on arrival, feeling homicidal with a pistol and a bible.
My nose trickles cold sweat in the night, and my reflection fades in the light.
I can’t breath, the air is night, I see no light,
Something isn’t right.
In my cranium I bleed like a psychotic hypnotic whom forced us to think robotic.
All of a sudden at once, I am frozen stiff shaking.
Not moving, in a seizure in a freezer baking.
Eratic static, of what I make the most, these words make no sense like plain burnt toast.
You can't comprehend what I feel due to the fact you breathe easy,
You're mortal, beneath me - believe me, I exist without a host, because I'm ghost.

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universescribe1 commented on Ghost

12-08-2008

Very ill.. Unsettling, but engaging. Your lines are fluid yet tough.. Props

beautifuldeath commented on Ghost

12-08-2008

exquisite.

Rickeyhood commented on Ghost

11-21-2008

Good poem. I think it needs more editing to bring out more meaning and imagery. overall good work, keep writing.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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