Glass boundaries.

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    Glass boundaries.

     The ocean of transparent air that lies between us might as well be crystalline. It appears that only the path that parts us is thus circumscribed; the mere perception of its presence dissuades me. If only I sensed only you.

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    Stryx commented on Glass boundaries.

    04-14-2010

    Ah, a young philosopher, with the heart of a poet. Nicely done.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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