Global W
the earth aches
heavens tears
the earth awaits
the trees weep
dieing of thirst
the skies to blue
to bring the rain
heavens tears
the earth awaits
the trees weep
dieing of thirst
the skies to blue
to bring the rain
Global W
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Tags: Nature
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naturelover commented on Global W
03-06-2009
- I guess I can't judge b/c I suck at poetry. but I'm super concerned about GW and I want to build a team of people near by to work together to do something... anything. and your poem didn't move me like I wanted to be moved. you're still better than me, though simply b/c you wrote a poem.
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