Gone

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    Gone

    It feels like years since I've seen you last. Laughing, smiling, warm sincere.
    Seeing you so weak was the hardest part. I feel a giant hurt inside my heart.
    The missing you is the longest part. I long to hear your voice, see your face, you should be sitting over there.
    Such a huge loss for me, for us, for the world.
    I hope, hope, hope I will see you again one day and you will greet me with your smile, your laugh, your joy.
    I hope you know how loved you are, how missed you are.
    Why, why, why so soon, The only time I see the you I know is in my mind, in my dreams.
    If I could just reach out and touch you and hold you I would never let you go....one day I will see you again, I will see you again.

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    ArgusWayne commented on Gone

    03-27-2010

    A beautiful emotional piece that anyone can relate to...that's what makes a great poem. Nice!

    dahlusion commented on Gone

    09-08-2009

    A lovely poetic lament for the one we long for and who is gone forever. A master piece!

    gallaxy commented on Gone

    08-30-2009

    The departure of a loved one from this earth is hard to swallow. Its thier love and pleasant thoughts and remembrances that keeps them alive in us always........

    lonewolf commented on Gone

    04-04-2009

    very heartfelt. the pain you feel will disappear, the memory of your friend is yours to keep.

    Phoenix9 commented on Gone

    12-12-2008

    very well written and so true

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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