Hair Brown

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(E.M.)

Hair Brown

Hair brown- falls into the lips/ I might kiss/

If they linger like this/ your inner might twitch/

Tastes that indulge in themselves, in self assured perfection,

Are dead past resurrection/ I move and your caressing/

In every sense, it is a business and I understand/

I am the supply and your are the demand/

Instead, we are still seated, the sliver/ of duck liver/

Is something more when on your fork,

Never mind that we can not afford,

The way you close your lips/ on a foreign dish/

Causes chills that make the body quiver/

The heart goes at a high-rate/ the blood is on a highway/

And my mind is irate/ “why don’t you make a move?”/

You may produce “Seinfeld” moments but it does not mean

You should curb your enthusiasm, too./

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Everest’s Poems (10)

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THE MEANING - THE MEANing - THE MEaning (THE YOU) 0
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The March To Hell (3/5) 1
A Picasso 0
Hair Brown 0
The First Move 0
The March Hell (2/5) 0
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The March To Hell (1/5) 4
Transform 5