Heart has been broken

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    It's about an boy who was so sweet. A girl called him her angle from heaven. When he died she was heart broken. She kept remembering him everywhere she went. She would never forget him and the old kumquat tree in her backyard. It's a poem about the lost love and loss of this boy. She really had passion for her angel boy so she wants him to be happy in heaven.

    Heart has been broken

               Heart has been Broken!
    2009 poem

    My heart has cracked
    I lost my love
    Who was an angel from above
    Now you gone
    You're far away

    My heart will stay sad
    I'll try not to be mad
    I'm now heart broken

    You were my prince I remember the good times
    Climbing up the mountains making snow angels
    Swimming in natures natural rivers
    Now your gone

    So is my connection that I had with you
    Your a sad long lost love to me
    I miss you climbing in my kumquat tree
    Oh you ment so much to me
    It made my heart cry
    Angels guide me forward
    I keep wanting to go back ,oh
    I'll never forget the times we had tonight 
    Your gone
    Resting in Heaven
    Sleep in peace tonight
    I'll miss you
    Never forget me

    I'll always remember you because your an angel to me.
    I'll never forget when we met climbing in the kumquat tree.
    I'll miss you forever
    Angels guide me home. 
    I guess I'll try to make it on my own.

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    rossmangeles commented on Heart has been broken

    06-20-2009

    Indeed, your poem was well written. I enjoy the simplicity of the message. It help make my day. keep it up!
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    AwesomeKee commented on Heart has been broken

    06-18-2009

    I guess you made few errors but still it's good poem. You really write many things about love.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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