Hell i dont know
when your standing by her side and she just don't see and the place don't feel right and she isn't really there when you look into her eyes and you don't see a love in the heart and there isn't anything to hold when there isn't a place to go no where you want to be with her nothing looks right and your afraid to walk in the dark she might come along and the street just don't seem right when all else fails and you don't look for more nothing in the mail nothing to care when your heart is empty and you just want more when you see the end but it wont come when time isn't yours and no one knows tracks in her heart will dim while this new love grows i don't see a way nothing to lose take her hand and walk on she wants to go then you will love the otherHell i dont know
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Tags: Emotional
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bjenkins commented on Hell i dont know
01-25-2011
- How sad. You can feel the pain all over the place here. Very well written though, and put together like a memory. Love it.
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koolmom0 commented on Hell i dont know
11-29-2010
- I like this Man, it is very good. I hope you will find happiness with the other. :) Rita
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