Hi Again

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Hi Again

Walking by you
I fly through a cloud
of your perfume
a mirage;
standing
proud in this room
the scent massages
an emotional high
and I try
without winning
to talk
and communicate
still grinning
my eyes smile
walk to you a greeting
still spinning 
as soon as yours
and my eyes
enter into meeting 

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Caboverde8 commented on Hi Again

04-23-2010

Gregg, I love this poem. I've always loved reading your poems/songs. You are very talented!

SuSpence commented on Hi Again

04-17-2010

I left u comment earlier if you remember, I still really like this poem, it flows so much better for the reader now allowing us to focus completely on your words and get lost in the flow of your wonderful words. Great Job my friend!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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