Hollow Eyes

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Hollow Eyes

fake smiles surround
suffocating from the subtlety
situations to delicate
to have with this mentality

I just stand silent
with a smile everyone will see
but hidden from sight
I know that this could never be

a soul cries out
but the screams that sound they are in vein
these emotions so deep in me
but the only thing I feel is pain

to tired to let go of this
but it haunts me each and every day
I grip the memories so tight
with words I cannot find to say

their life is gone but I’m still here
dying from the dreams I see
the smile fades off in the dark
suffocating from the subtlety...

By: Kevin Bakker

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jam4muzic commented on Hollow Eyes

08-08-2009

Aaaw...pure poetry. I'm in my own world when I read your poem. I like the negative enegry, I'm rejuvenated! Anyway, I thought your poem was magical. Do you mind checking out my poems? I'd like to know opinions of others...

lillyrain commented on Hollow Eyes

05-23-2009

OMG this poem is sooo good. I really really love it. WOW!!!!!! I really do love it. Just how it flows is wonderful.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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