Horrible Secret

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I was in 5th grade wen i wrote this. and yes i relize i didnt keep the ryhming up till the end.srry

Horrible Secret

Somethings been happening
I really can't say
But i really just wish someone would tell him to go away
He says things to me I dare not repeat
he does things to me to me I wouldn't wish on my enemy
He's like a nightmare and I just can't wake up
He'll grab me and throw down to the floor
He'll do things to me I'm just not ready for
And when he's threw I'll cry
I feal like a whore
And I always ask why me?
Why can't I tell?
Why can't i just ignore the threats?
How long will he continue?
Am I the only one?
And every answer I think of only make me feal worse
So bad I feel like running away or going to a diffrent world
This secret is to horrible to tell

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CasimirJash commented on Horrible Secret

09-24-2009

speechless and sadness, letting out the feelings in kind of telling, I hope somebody hears your cries and dry those eyes. wonderful poem, filled with emotions

ravenrose commented on Horrible Secret

09-23-2009

im sorry. ive had a bad child hood as well. i made a promise to my goddess when i was 13 that i would never let a nother guy touch me if i did not want to. its had but just keep standing tall

dual commented on Horrible Secret

09-23-2009

You will survive this... thank you for sharing... I am sure that someone will reag your words and know they are not alone. You have a great talent!

ErikatheVampire

09/23/2009

thnk yu tht means a lot God Bless

KoriTsuki commented on Horrible Secret

09-22-2009

=O so sorry erika, must of been a hell of a child hood.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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