I am from

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    I am from

     I am from first fears
    to my favorite scenery
    From a hard move
    to first truthful tears

    I am from hard childhoods
    to good times
    from best friends
    to promising not to lie

    I am from rumors from others
    to the truths behind them
    From being content
    to being destroyed

    I am from the mistakes I have made
    to trying to correct them
    from hiding behind the truth
    to learning that life is the truth

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    gallaxy commented on I am from

    09-18-2009

    Sounds like as one would contend to the basic emotions of life. Ins and outs. very well said girl! :)
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    HeavensGuardian commented on I am from

    09-16-2009

    as a flower comes out to bloom and is revealing its beauty in the revelation of life, so also this poetic work shows a poet stiving to find all they wish to say and try to say so in just one poem. P.S. u will have to write more, because you are so much more than just what you have written.
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    queenrosered commented on I am from

    09-16-2009

    VERY WISE WORDS DANI, FROM ONE SO YOUNG! YOU ARE GROWING UP FAST AND HOPEFULLY ARE LEARNING LIFE LESSONS AND PUTTING THEM TO GOOD USE! A VERY GOOD READ MY POETIC FRIEND, TYVM! QUEENROSERED! :)
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    cliftondurant commented on I am from

    09-16-2009

    this is god you have talent keep up the good work and thanks for sharing
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    bforibus commented on I am from

    09-16-2009

    i love elevator effect in this poem. the flow was gr8 and tail of the story. very well done
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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