I love my bike

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A man laughed at me on my bike, and it hit a nerve!

I love my bike

I love my bike


I cycle to work and I cycle home.

Yet today I found myself quite alone.


No energy and ill, nose streaming and weak.

I hit a tough hill and physically a peak.


After trying to make my legs go I hopped off and walked.

Thighs like jelly, I thought I was going to hit the floor.


At the top I turned to get back on,

And along came 'Mr Armstrong' whizzing along.


He looked at me with cheek and knew what I'd done.

He laughed and said 'HA!' 10-speed gleaming in the sun.


I nearly cried, got back on and made it down the slope.

One look or word can tip the scales, that smug, cycling bloke.


(Damn him!)


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