I wish I could have danced with cinderella

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    is my proudest work

    I wish I could have danced with cinderella

    I wish I could have danced with cinderella that day

    she looked as pretty as the month of may

     

     

    but I was sad becasue I had to leave the nest day

     

     

    I wanted to be the king and she could be the queen ,but I was not even price charming

     

     

    she dance like there was care

    but all I could do was stare

     

    I like cinderella she is a wonderful person I think i might lover her

     

     

    but she doesnt notice me ,but still I dont bother

     

    cinderrela allways looks so pretty

     

    but she doesn't like me

     

    what a pitty

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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